Mr Stewart read over my work on his plane trip back from Japan.
I have to re-structure the essay plan of the first two paragraphs.
Thinking of putting the whole essay in chronological order - this enables me to only mention the Hindenburg Programme and Service Auxiliory Law (which had formerlly doubled up in the industrial and economic paragraphs) once - and this will save words!!!
I am going to the Barr Smith on Saturday to return some books and borrow some more specific to Hindenburg and Ludendroff and their military dictatorship.
Onto the polishing stage now!!! :)
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The idea sounds good. The direction involving H and L will be something very different in your essay. It will take the content and analysis to another level. You need to look at how to get your tables into the appendices. Hope the books aren't overdue!
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