Just spoke to Mr Stewart,
I must focus on the "adapt" part of my essay question.
I can make comparisons to other nations and how they adapted in WW1.
I can also make comparisons in Germany before and after WW1.
some thoughts.....
Ludendorff and Hindenburg created a military dictatorship as a way to adapt to the demands of total warfare in Germany. They placed the needs of the military above the needs of the populace, and as a result of this the women, children and few men on the Home Front starved.
I need to write less an informative essay, and mroe evaluative.
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The focus on adapt will give the insight to the question that you need . It will give you the chnace you need for the 'big' mark.
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