Log Update after talking to Mr Stewart

Mr Stewart read over my independent essay again.
We've decided;

• To make the introduction more 'general'.
• To split my first paragraph into 2 (on on industrial, and another on economic).
• To keep it SHORT AND SIMPLE!! (KISS) by getting rid of italics for names and stuff.
• I need to expand on the military dictatorship of Hindenburg and Ludendorff.
• AND I need to be consistent with the spelling of 'programme' - I like the double m and e version.
• But!!! on the plus side; apparently I'm "on the right track" :)

So far.....got 1800 words approx and the essay is getting there.