I have essential re-written my independent essay from a different view point.
I find I can build on the assumed knowledge within the first essay, and have taken out the paragraph about the naval blockade, and incorporated this instead into my argument.
I have 2 body paragraphs; one on food and another on economic and industry.
I have written less about the effects of total war, but how the Reichstag adapted to it, through the Hindenburg Programme and various committees and organisations established to maintain the war time economy.
So far, I have about 1600 words - all good :)
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The idea sounds excellent. Anything you can do to reduce narrative and focus on analysis the better the outcome. But you may need more than two main paragraphs. Maybe look at how the two ideas can be divided.
ReplyDeleteI have now have one paragraph on economic and industrial changes, and the other is on social and political changes.
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